I like the way the expressive lines interweave within each other and create dimension. I think the upper most right corner should be filled in as well, to finish the piece.
The directional lines create a very cool perspective that reminds me of outer space. The spirals seem to such the viewer in and the triangular vessels appear to be coming closer in view.
I agree, the second one is quite surreal. I think Laura should settle our debate for us.
The first drawing seems to be directional, yet the lines almost borderline expression. The lines start to curve more and are less stiff in direction. This is quite a delightful peace. There seems to be a lightening in the bottom center of the image. Is this intentional?
I do like the negative space in the corner, gives it a bit of contrast from the page as a whole.
Cool! The directional lines must have taken a long time. It's great. And I really don't know what the second one in, sorry, but if I use my imagination it kinda looks like ships in outer space. Either way I really like it.
I like the directional line drawing. It reminds me of a bowl of noodles, twisting and tangling. The turns are not as sharp as I imagine a directional iine drawing to be. I do like it. The expressive line drawing brings to mind paper airplanes. I can imagine looking up and seeing a plethora of paper airplanes flying over my head.
I love the first one. Would love to see it in color! Amazing that you covered almost every inch of the paper. Lot of variety and spacial differences. Good stuff.
I like the way the expressive lines interweave within each other and create dimension. I think the upper most right corner should be filled in as well, to finish the piece.
ReplyDeleteThe directional lines create a very cool perspective that reminds me of outer space. The spirals seem to such the viewer in and the triangular vessels appear to be coming closer in view.
Im confused....
ReplyDeleteI think the first one is Directional Line right? Any way, its quite impressive the line movement on it.
And if Im not mistaken the second one is Expressive Line. And this one reminds me of Salvador Dali somehow. :)
I agree, the second one is quite surreal. I think Laura should settle our debate for us.
ReplyDeleteThe first drawing seems to be directional, yet the lines almost borderline expression. The lines start to curve more and are less stiff in direction. This is quite a delightful peace. There seems to be a lightening in the bottom center of the image. Is this intentional?
I do like the negative space in the corner, gives it a bit of contrast from the page as a whole.
What do you think?....Anyone else out there?
Cool! The directional lines must have taken a long time. It's great. And I really don't know what the second one in, sorry, but if I use my imagination it kinda looks like ships in outer space. Either way I really like it.
ReplyDeleteI like the directional line drawing. It reminds me of a bowl of noodles, twisting and tangling. The turns are not as sharp as I imagine a directional iine drawing to be. I do like it.
ReplyDeleteThe expressive line drawing brings to mind paper airplanes. I can imagine looking up and seeing a plethora of paper airplanes flying over my head.
Great work on the postings to you all. Good design work as well!
ReplyDeleteI love the first one. Would love to see it in color! Amazing that you covered almost every inch of the paper. Lot of variety and spacial differences. Good stuff.
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